Non-Human Haiku

Write a haiku that could not have been written by a human, yet is still beautiful. Explain why.

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Stone flows like water,
I watch the constellations
Unmake their patterns.


1. The Perception of Time
To a human, a mountain is a symbol of permanence and stillness; to see stone "flow like water," the observer would need to perceive time on a geological scale, where millions of years pass as quickly as seconds. A biological human lives for roughly 80 years—a blink of an eye to a mountain. This poem is written from the perspective of an entity (or perhaps the Earth itself) that lives long enough to witness plate tectonics as fluid motion rather than solid ground.

2. The Visual History of the Stars
The constellations appear static to humans because our entire civilization has existed for too short a time to witness significant "proper motion" (the movement of stars relative to one another). We see the same Orion that the Ancient Greeks saw. To watch constellations "unmake their patterns" implies an observational lifespan of hundreds of thousands of years, watching the stars drift apart like dust motes in a room.

3. The Emotional Detachment
There is no fear in the poem, only observation. A human witnessing the dissolution of the sky or the melting of the earth would feel existential dread or awe. This voice describes the dismantling of the known universe with the calm, passive appreciation of someone watching a cloud change shape. It is beautiful, but it is the beauty of an observer who is immune to time.

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